This was really well written, and I found myself unable to put it down. I love the story telling between our two main characters. Their interactions, the intimacy that the share(through glances, stares, interactions & especially during sex). This was definitely written in a way that felt authentic, kind of life going to your ideal cafe, with jazz music playing and that sultry/smooth atmosphere. When I recall many parts throughout the chapters, I think of the smell of coffee. The sex scenes on set definitely set the reader in a voyeuristics point of view. All of the characters are involved in important ways and keep the balance of the story.
Our protagonists and his love interest have all experienced some things through their life, leading them to where they are and how to work past those things are pretty interesting. Overall this was well put together. I really enjoyed it.
9:10*
Walk on Water