Tigerstar☆'s manga / #R18(294)

eh. this is mid. i found it annoying the seme did some really shitty stuff and we just brushed it off and carried on our merry way.

The art was REALLY gorgeous but... ahh... i just don't think the characters had as much depth as i would like. it's more smut then plot, i'd like to get to know them a little better then we did -_-

damn now that i've actually read op these zosan djs hit different. very nice.

hmmm... nnggg... well. its ok i guess. the story is extremely subpar (like 3/10) but the arts really nice. some of the dialogue is cringe AF and... this is a really specific and maybe weird gripe but. the way the seme is a perfect unaffected unflappable person ever during sex is actually kinda a turn off. he was blowing the ukes back out and his facial expression hardly changed at all the whole time. idk it's just not very hot if he doesn't get into it a least a little like >_> also! the way the uke just gives the fuck up on the seme after getting yelled at a little bit was so stupid. i KNOW it's a staple of the celebrity/normie genre but like. he didn't even think about it for a second. the way he was all ''he's not someone i can keep all to myself, i'm holding him back'' INSTANTLY was just so grating. like homeboy is just a model man. he's not an actor or a celebrity or god forbid an idol (you know someone for whom a dating scandal would be a big deal) he's JUST a model. and an overseas model with a very successful career outside of japan. i think he'd be just fine if the tabloids published a few pictures but thats! just my opinion i guess!

man. ch 6 is. whew. so the arts insanely sexy the way the seme manhandles the uke drives me insane so so my kink. buuuuuut... the dialogue... kinda squicks me out. if the uke at least did that thing that so many bl do wherein he was resistant at first but by the halfway point he way all ''kyaahhh feels good!'' then. i'd let it slide. but he stays kidna pissed off and says no the entire time orz. internally he's like mad at how good it feels but it feels kinda shitty when externally all he's expressing is mostly quiet rage. and the seme isn't really helping because he's all at least your body is honest about how good you feel (you've read that a 100 times i'm sure) at the end of the day i'm gonna let it slide because i'm a fujo and i've got low ass standards but. like i'm really disappointed. the setup seemed really cute and they really seemed to be opening up to each other in the earlier chapters. i'm bummed the seme turned out to be SUCH a massive dickhead. update for ch8. it like. keeps getting worse man. the uke REJECTED rejected the seme and yet... the seme is the one pissed off? where does he get off being the one whos angry about the situation. like. you forced yourself on him and when he doesn't warm up to you after a couple months of you fucking pretending to be nice you get pissed and snap? he's the one who should be fucking angry rn what is your problem! god. the art is still really really good but like. it's not getting better. the uke was so honest about the fact he DOESN'T like the seme. at all. neither as a lover or as a friend he straight up doesn't enjoy his company and like. it's not Tsundere thing where he says one thing and means the other he just straight up doesn't like him. why. why did you write it like that. NANDE!!! i'm just mad the arts so good and the story is so shit. gonna keep reading for a few more chapters but. if it somehow gets worse then this i'm dropping because it just makes me so mad every week. edit: I can't do this anymore it pisses me off so much i'm going to give myself brain damage. i'm tapping out here, i give up. damn this stupid webtoon to hell. i hope the artists does another one later with a less detestable plot so i can enjoy their sexy ass art orz

review for the main story: it's. okay. like. it's a 7/10. above average, interesting plot decent art. characters were always up to some shit which kept things lively. the antagonist was so crazy, like the worst manipulative hateful ex boyfriend ever. he didn't end up trying to kill the uke so i'll give him points for that i guess. i enjoyed reading it but i don't think there much here to compel me to read again. i'm satisfied with my experience with it. i thought the ending on the last main chapter was really good. i really liked the best friend character he was a real one. i didn't like how they insinuated the antagonist and the best friend might get together at the end. i know people can change so i GUESS he could grow as a person but i just feel like the best friend deserves better. we'll see if the epilogue delve into it, if not it's literally just the LIGHTEST insinuations so it's no biggie.

read this on mangadex, remember it being mad sexy. the arts top tier stuff ok dokie heres the review now that i've reread this. a collection of shorter stories, not one continuous one. the only thing i can say applies to all of them in the arts insanely hot. so so sexy. as for the individual plots. the first one (chapters 1-3 i think) is okay. it's not mind blowing and it spends to much time on the smut for there to be real depth there but its cute enough. the second ones juts okay, i don't really love semes that are that calculative but. well. the art and character design are. mmmm. this couple returns for the last chapter. the third story... i didn't like as much. its typical anime generic desert kingdom stuff and its falls pretty squarely into dubcon territory. the last story is nice! a little modern moment set in london. the uke is really cute with his hair down. i enjoy the dialogue for this one a lot. the premise of the sex scene was very much up my alley.

hm hm okay so. 10 chaps in the review so far. the seme is kinda a dickhead. like he's fr fr red flag material buuut. he hasn't actually done anything wrong yet. like his internal monologue is kinda shitty but he's never forced the uke to do anything, everything's been totally above board so far so. depending on where we go from here i feel like the story could be either ''shithead takes advantage of a guy who doesn't know how to say no'' OR ''asshole fucks around and accidentally falls in love'' we just have to see if the author wants to go for i guess. could also be something else entirely but thats just the vibe i'm getting. (really really hope he falls in love. romance please. begging you) also. uh. the sex scene. i really really have a thing for when the uke just gets manhandled i really. like it. very tasty the way the seme manoeuvres him like a ragdoll. however we do have a slight problem. that dick is just to big man. i know it's fiction but damn that thing is a weapon of mass destruction, it looks like it would cause actual physical harm dude. i can put it aside for now but it ruins my vibe a little when it's so out of proportion, how does he even get that in his pants?

look i'm not proud of this okay. like. this is clearly just porn, but not only that it's also extremely mid porn. i like to pretend i have very refined taste in hentai but honestly i will read anything i find on the ground. the arts really rough and the plots non existent but... well i like a tentacle. if this was complete i'd read it quietly and be on my way but as it is... i wait i suppose.