tepho_snoopy's manga / #OV+DSV+MP(220)

I wanted to see more of the munchkins... also more sex scenarios

Guideverse

Too Shoooooort!!! This was great... I did get sidetracked by my desired for revenge (^▽^*)ゞ.... but the ending came too soon! Now I'm not saying I wanted more (if I could I would give this 9/10)... The art was great The story line was gut wrenching And the chracter design was perfect for each character... I'm looking at you Yamada (I love a best friend with glasses) But it had too little of everything else... Too little intimacy Too little main couple interaction Too little on certain chracters' development Too little on resolutio... And had NO REVENGE! If each of these were expanded on we could of delved deeper into the intensity of vital moments in the story... maybe even some info on the omega that Asshole was talking about and some payback... maybe even more Yamada

This was simple and cute! Could've been better but I appreciated the simplicity. I'm also glad I took a break before I read the second story... I thought it would be filler but I liked it just the same