The pacing is off. The characters are stale. The stories are too rushed to be good, although the foundation is there. The characters behave so illogically it's funny.
1st story had a good foundation. 2nd story did not.
Rape warning for the 2nd story.
All my marks are for the art, which is lovely. If I could I'd add half a mark for the 1st story having poorly-executed potential.
Ai ga Kami wo Korosu Toki