Momotarou's manga / #Shounen ai(29)

I actually really like the premise and the art is serviceable, but the story-telling is all over the place. Characters aren't so much introduced as they are suddenly flung into the story. Who they are, their connections to the main characters, and their motivations are never really established and we as the reader are expected to figure it out for ourselves, which is fine in some cases, but the way the story is constantly jumping between character perspectives, flashbacks, and the present makes this super difficult. Like the blond with long hair. What exactly is his relationship with Liu Ye? Were they dating or is it all just a one-sided possessive love? If they weren't dating, then why does this guy feel so entitled to Liu Ye's affections? If they were dating, then why was the blond sleeping with that random in that flashback and why was Liu Ye so unaffected by it? Speaking of confusing transitions, we're thrown into flashbacks with no real warning or reason and sometimes it's hard to differentiate between the flashback and the present. I'm still reading this because I'm stubborn and I do want to know what's going on with the sister, but I still have problems with this.

Mc is a little boring but I'm still really enjoying this. How do I get chapters faster? You want all the money in my 401k? You want my soul? The soul of my first unborn child? My dog?? You can have anything but my dog.