Jan 14, 2021
Ok. I can't believe I'm giving this a 5 BUT YES I DO. IDK BRO I EXPECTED IT TO BE BAD COZ ITS YAOI (I mean not all but some yaois out there are just pure fuck less fluff) but this iSNT EVEN DIFFERENT BUT THERES SOMETHING IN IT! Is it the domsub thingy that mirrors omegaverse so much that made me like it? Ig, maybe, probs. But also it's the ending for me. Actually I wanted it to be longer with more of their relationship afterwards. Like I think they would compliment each other so much and would be a healthy cute couple. Plus the climax para nako is katung naa gud sila outside then he can't say the safeword pero he really really wants to (but he's too scared to even remember 28395, or say a single word), Dom immediately picks it up and says sorry. THAT, MY MAN, IS A VERY GOOD PERSON. I think there's a deeper plot than what lies beneath the surface (and I think this was supposed to be longer) considering na Dom probably wasn't actually a murderer or didn't intended to kill and get in jail. I think there's more pajud and I wanted to know that. I wanted the sub to know how kind the Dom is (I'm CONVINCED Dom really is kind). I hated how this ended (not the ending, just the fact that it ended. Honestly wanted to read more of this) but looking back at it, I think ending short is also it's charm- leaving the deeper plot to the readers mind, the Dom's past and this couple's most likely vibrant cute future. Ah, I like the characters (not the smut. But the characters, concept, and story.)
Lost in the Fire (specifically the beatdrop+ siren part near the end)- LSS and in love with this song btw. Gnight it's 12:47 am.
Inu wa Kogarete Hizamazuku