The art is good. But the story telling is confusing especially the beginning. There's a lot of parts na not explained enough or just really jumping or glossing over the topic and move forward. So may mga parts na mapapawhat ka na lang, bat nangyari yun ano nagtrigger, what happened after that scene. Mga ganon ba hahaha
The smut is good, needs a lot of improvement with pacing and storytelling. I'll give this 3.5
Self-indulgent Vanilla