leehyu's manga / #Time Travel(3)

SPOILERSSS.... it is actually good but a lot of holes in the story. First is that the FL is really a strong female lead at the start when she get back in her past, but in the latter part of story the FL became weak and kind of annoying. The fact that she made decisions she will regret later is kind of weak for me. Second is that the story is too rushed. Like this story could have gone to chapter 180 or something if the author elaborated more of the ending arc. Because they easily find all of the evidences like s flash. Also, this has a good ending but poor execution. The author could have given us a chapter to know if the FL and ML get to have a child, a chapter to know if weed hair and carrot have a happy ending and also a chapter if ji eun have a happy life after sacrificing her divine powers. Also, the God in this story is kind of annoying too. This story could be good on its own without a person coming back to the past. I mean this story is much better without ji eun. Because ji eun is necessary only in the introduction of the story and how duke zena got caught. I mean her entrance could have been better. Lastly, they took a lot of time before the coming age of the FL that is the reason why the ending of this story is so rushed. To the point that it is so confusing.

It's good but feels shallow. I think that a lot of the scenarios is not well explained. The manga has a good plot but not well-executed. The ending feels rushed, but it's a good read

This is really the definition of a STRONG FEMALE LEAD. You know there's a lot of manga or webtoon that says that the female lead were strong. Yeah they are strong, but when they all fell in love with their own male leads they became much weaker and became dependent to the male lead. The reason why I am giving this story a lot of praise is that, it really revolves to the plot, like the revenge of the female lead. It really sticks to that plot and mindset until the end. It also really revolves much in politics which I really like. Lastly, the fl and ml romance story is barely mentioned. That is why I like it. They stick to the plot that the FL needs to rise in rank and get revenge for what happened to her in her past life and I really applaud the author for sticking to the female lead's revenge and her story rising in ranks. I also like how the author did not force in some chapters or panels for the romance of male lead and female lead. The story is really connected to each other and smooth to read. I Just wish that them getting reincaranted again at that time have explanation. Since the person who created the phone seems to know the reason why they got to be in that time. I wish there's a story side for that.