leehyu's manga / #Female Protagonist(3)

SPOILERSSS.... it is actually good but a lot of holes in the story. First is that the FL is really a strong female lead at the start when she get back in her past, but in the latter part of story the FL became weak and kind of annoying. The fact that she made decisions she will regret later is kind of weak for me. Second is that the story is too rushed. Like this story could have gone to chapter 180 or something if the author elaborated more of the ending arc. Because they easily find all of the evidences like s flash. Also, this has a good ending but poor execution. The author could have given us a chapter to know if the FL and ML get to have a child, a chapter to know if weed hair and carrot have a happy ending and also a chapter if ji eun have a happy life after sacrificing her divine powers. Also, the God in this story is kind of annoying too. This story could be good on its own without a person coming back to the past. I mean this story is much better without ji eun. Because ji eun is necessary only in the introduction of the story and how duke zena got caught. I mean her entrance could have been better. Lastly, they took a lot of time before the coming age of the FL that is the reason why the ending of this story is so rushed. To the point that it is so confusing.

Its good, but the ML and villains were way too boring

This is actually good, I like the pacing of the story. The only problem is the villain, his way of revenge is cliche and childish. You can tell that he is immature tho. I actually noticed how isekai webtoon always have this kind of villain. Like they don't really have a solid proof to take revenge or like they don't have a reason to really take revenge. Because they are just blaming the main characters whenever they want revenge. But I like the 2 FL I wish there's more story about Kara because I really like her character. How i wish there's more chapter about the babies growing up