Misya's manga / #romance(53)

The plot is intriguing and the characters are well expressed. However, I have to subtract some stars for the occasional very poor translating.

️Opinion️ For those saying the FL is dumb, I don’t find myself in agreement. Being the author, Laria knows how the story SHOULD flow, but she doesn’t want to die thus, causing the timeline to deviate from the original. She is using her knowledge to the best of her abilities and there are going to be outsider factors and scenarios that may influence the current timeline, assuming that this world is not a story but reality. Which is why I don’t think she is dumb.

Read if you dare~ Tis’ the ramblings of a weirdly avid story reader~ Despite how fast paced and not fully fleshed out the characters are, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. Ironically, while unsatisfying, I strangely like that the fast pace made everyone get to the point. Personally, the only minor ick for me is that the characters’ presence were so flimsy. There were many characters that I could tell were solely to progress the plot. I would have liked to see more character development. It’s the the honest truth that everyone struggles in life, no matter how trivial one might think. It doesn’t really matter whether you are a criminal or a saint now, everyone has endured some kind of challenge. Now, that is not to excuse any heinous crimes or deplorable behavior. What I’m trying to say is that it’s impossible to always act valiantly or noble. It would have been nice to see some strife in making decisions. Perhaps, instead of Eli accepting Edna right off the bat, the suspicion could have persisted for longer. It’s all fantasy, but I doubt in reality, that love just made him ignore everything.