pyscho.simp's manga / #smut(2)

did feel like jaehyuk could have grovelled much more at the ending, then again ig he was always portrayed as a calm and somewhat patient person that didn't considerably force himself that much onto yeon oh outside of physical sex. areas of the story definitely could have developed but overall i was obsessed w their shyness and the ART AND BODY ANATOMY. I will never get over the muscles (esp the back muscles omfg) and the hip area the lower torso omfg evth honestly i j love how its not super bulgy and more realistic in comparison to some other art styles, slender and simple yet elegant somehow ugh i j love Eeej's art style it's a shame she's only got two romantic works and her others are short rape stories... her art style really suits stories with mature romance and emotions and drama. the historical side story could have definitely been told after we got a decently longer modern side story continuation bc i think it probs threw lots of readers off

I'VE NEVER FELT SO STAISFIED READING A CHAPTER WHEN IF INSIHED CHAP 94 UGH yh the tension in this story ugh the build up and the yh abs and beautiful body art im just such a sucker for good art and body proportions and the fucking hip muscles ughhh... anyways my only criticism is i really liked hansoo like omg when i realised the kim dude was eyeing him up i literally got scared, but anyways i wish hansoohad a more realistic adult-like maturity about him. yh my geenral criticism is i alw hate childish logic so whenever yoon jay throws those phrases around like 'you're mine' 'should i rly have to mind you when it's you own mistake you got hurt' 'yh i gave myself the right to throw all your shit out' like if this was a real man ik he'd get slapped like wtaf. anyways tbh that's a criticism for all bl out there that includes lins like that tbh, so honeslty technically no criticsm for this story specifically!!! oh wait actually tbh the end with evth just happening at the same time after he wakes up from his coma was a bit rushed, but yh no i rly liked this story, i like the build up and the whole arc where he realises he's found a reason to live and i feel like the whole Memory movie plot is supposed to mimic Yoohan's own life, wish i understood the metaphor better but anways this review is allover the place but basically 5/5 absolute best read for a while no srs complaints apart from i need to see yoohan spent on the bed more (refer to chap 80 )