AoiChan's manga / #oneshot(19)

I cant say this is really good some of the story frame was sooooo rushed and really sad story but if you look on the other hand their story was emotional and bitter. For YAOI I could say yeah ... but for story plot I would say it was really bad. Sorry for commenting like this but I am more on story than seeing all the sex scene on the story :)

Rush, Good enough for One Shot story, Scenes are good too in total kinda liek it but something is missing I guess <.<

its a so - so rate ╮(￣▽￣)╭ but it can be more good if they continue a bit on this one =) since the Uke - prostitute and it seems he wants to dig more money by getting info from the Seme - costumer that he has a BDSM hobbies and it went well. Feels it is rush =(

ლ(´ڡ`ლ)again its kinda weird having an audience while doing that lol but that monk is really LOL Funny but hell its good.... Must READ this !!!

┑(￣Д ￣)┍ telling you the truth.... do not read this even tho the ending was kinda..... sweet, cute, adorable to some readers. But after reading this story you will feel unsatisfied TRUST ME ... its kinda waste of time >_> to that is....

ｉｔｓ　ｏｎｅ　ｓｈｏｔ　ｂｕｔ　ｔｈｅ　ｓｔｏｒｙ　ｗａｓ　ｆｕｌｌｆｉｌｌｉｎｇ　ｔｏ　ｍｅ．．．　ａａｈｈｈ．．．　ｓｏｅｍｔｈｉｎｇ　ｌｉｋｅ　ｔｈｉｓ　ｉｔ　ｖｅｒｙ　ｒａｒｅ　ｔｏ　ｓｅｅ　ｔｈｅ　ｏｎｅ　ｓｈｏｔ　ｓｏｏｏ　ｇｏｏｄ　ｏｎ　ｔｈｅ　ｅｎｄｉｎｇ，　ｎｅ？　Ｄｅｆｉｎｉｔｅｌｙ　ｔｈｉｓ　ｏｎｅ　ｉｓ　ｅｎｊｏｙａｂｌｅ　ａｎｄ　ｉｆ　ｔｈｉｓ　ｓｔｏｒｙ　ｄｒａｇ　ａｌｏｎｇ　ｍｏｒｅ　ｄｅｆｉｎｉｔｅｌｙ　ｔｈｅ　ｒｅａｄｅｒｓ　ｗｉｌｌ　ｇｏ　ｃｒａｚｙ　ｈａｈａｈａｈａ　ｗｅｌｌｌ　ｔｈａｔｓ　ｏｎｅ　ｓｈｏｔ　～＿＿＾

(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧ actually I like this one not much sex scene on it but the story makes my heart ache oh.... drama yeah .... its good :)