LaLaLiyah's manga / #Love Triangle(2)

There hasn’t been many Royalty full color yaoi that has decent art, this story does a great job with that. The story is cliché with the slave and master troupe, the author tried to make it realistic when it comes to a complete ending, and because of how porn like the plot has become, the realistic ending felt rushed. It’s a good smut, but so much sex over shadowed an actual story, and sometimes it’s fine to have just straight up porn. The problem is how the author still tried to make it a story, it doesn’t mix well and makes this world that has so much potential to be more fleshed out just plain silly. Honestly the characters actions don’t make much sense, but I will just come to peace with myself and consider this one as a Hentai. So as a hentai the sex scenes in my opinion were boring, and if I was to look at it as a smut story, (because yes you can add sex scenes and still have a good story) the story line is bad. Good art, at least it had an ending. 2 stars.

The Seme is an ass hole, if you’re reading hoping for the twins to be happy together and heal drop it now because when Ray wakes up he moves to another city leaving Kile with Lou. Edith gets captured, Asher retires from the Bureau yadayadayada. It’s not a satisfying ending at all. Lou has been a complete asshole to Kile, had sex with him because he looked like his twin, Kile suffers and gets everyone’s anger taken out on him because his twin brother is dead. All Kile does is forgive and forgive and at the end of the story, he doesn’t even care to be with his brother anymore, he wants to make Lou (who used him as Ray’s replacement) feel better for being an asshole. Does anyone really care about Ray? Or Kile? Or do the two of them just have to accept how shit they’ve been treated because of how selfish everyone in this story is. Lou’s love for Kile doesn’t even make any sense because I thought the whole thing was that he went batshit crazy for a year because of Ray, now that Ray is awake and alive suddenly Lou likes Kile? But before Ray died it was suggested in the flash backs that him and Lou were in a relationship but when Lou goes to find a solution for Ray to escape Edith, Ray has sex with Asher? Mhm, the plot is all over the place, the ending was predictable in the worst way possible and all the characters who sucked in the beginning still suck after 80 chapters. One star and shove it up your ass so you don’t waste your time.