Errant Belle's manga / #Umm(2)

I was surprised by how much I didn't like this. The artwork was fine, but the story and dialog were really awkward. The story had a strong incest vibe, as well as a shotacon theme. There was also very little development of the relationship between the main characters, so their feelings felt fake and/or forced.

It's OK I guess. The whole BDSM thing isn't really my cup of tea. I also get the impression the seme is not fan of the role play, which makes the story less appealing.