maci's manga / #short(8)

it’s a short story about hunters forced to join the military to exempt their family. the uke was adopted and became a hunter to keep his younger brother from joining the military. he rapes his younger brother before leaving for the army. time passes, then they reunite. the top ( younger brother ) then proceeds to bring the uke ( older brother ) back to life. then the top proceeds to rape the bottom multiple times bc it’s said a hunter can keep an erection for ten rounds. the story ends with the top telling the bottom that there’s still seven rounds left and that he loves him. the art is great. the top and bottom are both nice looking. they’re both buff and have muscles. umm, other than that, the story was ass. just rape and no communication for years between them after the first rape. then rape again once they see each other. i mean, they both feel something for each other, but they never confessed their feelings before the bottom left for the army. i wish there was communication between them. this could’ve been good. i’ve read stuff that’s more fucked up than this, but i wish it had a better story. it had potential to be great :/ hopefully they continue it or scrap it and remake the story. this still has potential from where it ended. i could see it being a decent read. overall, it was okay. nothing great, but not too unbearable.

this was amazing ! the art, characters, and story were beautifully done. i loved how garm accepted hati immediately ( turns out he’s always wanted him ). hati took a bit of time, but he eventually grew to accept garm too. i loved that skoll was still alive and came back. i’m happy for everyone involved. i will say, though, it felt a bit weird at the start of each chapter. it felt like something was missing and the chapter started somewhere other than where the last chapter ended. overall, i love the story ! they’re playful, affectionate, and sweet ! the baby wolves are super cute too (:

short but cute ! i loved the top. he’s such a sweetie. the bottom has his reasons for not trusting him, but he eventually accepts him. it’s adorable and sweet. i wish there were more chapters though as this was very fun to read. i loved their relationship ! i hope to see more work from the author / artist in the future (: overall, it was a good, quick read. i really enjoyed it !!!!

this was so goofy. the story flow was so funny. the mc literally went “ welp, “ and never really questioned anything. when he did, the vampire just said something and bam, no more questioning that. it was so funny. definitely a good, short read if you’re not looking for anything with a plot. the art was great too. love ml with eyebags, especially black hair and yellow eyes. the mc was cute too. overall, it was good. just turn your brain off when reading, lol.

the official translation was really bad. the dialogue between the characters was awkward, and there were a lot of grammar mistakes. the art was pretty in one panel and not so pretty in the next panel. the story didn’t really make sense. it was like they took a good story and downsized it so much that it became unreadable. it also had flashbacks that jumped around awkwardly. same with the main story; the story was just bad pacing. everything moved too fast. this is my lowest rated manhwa, which sucks because this could’ve been good if it was maybe ten chapters instead of seven. i would like to see a full version of this story, so hopefully the author does one. overall, it was an okay read. not good by any means, but not downright awful. just turn off your brain when reading.

super cute ! it was short, but i really enjoyed it ! the art is amazing. love this artist’s style so much ! overall, i really enjoyed this one. 10/10