pinkstarred's manga / #smut(578)

...unexpected things happened. (°_°) what did I just read? The fudanshi story was okay if your into cute uke brothers and long haired older semes who take control. The last story comes out of nowhere and expect tentacles and penetration with very little plot. So be forewarned for that, cause I wasn't and that was my first encounter with that kink. Luckily it was tame in that not too much detail was shown for my poor virgin eyes. (O_O) Nothing too surprising otherwise, just your average shallow smut.

Meh

I saw someone describe stories like this as a "slam, bam , thank you ma'am". It stuck.

Pretty cute, simple average plot. The childhood friends confess and stay together. The kohei and senpai have a bit of role reveal with a cute seme and older uke.

Now this is fantasy. I could not stop giggling at the rediculousness. Heheheψ(｀∇´)ψ

Story 1: The boys are so pretty. Story 2: Hinako sensei seriously has a thing for attacking the uke. Basically molesting. Which isn't my thing, but dang can she make likable characters and knows how to weave an intriguing plot. Which makes me want to read her work even if it's not my thing. And ofcourse the art is bomb.

The art is gorgeous, almost too pretty and the bold lines remind me of a coloring book. However, the paneling was distracting, it was like the scenes were imprisoned and stilted the flow of the story. I think the thick outline was way too heavy for this type of drawing and for almost every scene. I've seen it done beautifully but I honestly can't think of any as an example. Which is good because that shouldn't be what stands out o I just have a bad memory. Anyway, besides that it was good but kind of lukewarm. There wasn't any real tension passion or otherwise, though the whole thing is basically a sexy scenes. It just felt like drawings, pretty and hot drawings, but just drawings. There wasn't much life to the characters, it had potential to be better.