pinkstarred's manga / #College age(2)

The art is gorgeous, almost too pretty and the bold lines remind me of a coloring book. However, the paneling was distracting, it was like the scenes were imprisoned and stilted the flow of the story. I think the thick outline was way too heavy for this type of drawing and for almost every scene. I've seen it done beautifully but I honestly can't think of any as an example. Which is good because that shouldn't be what stands out o I just have a bad memory. Anyway, besides that it was good but kind of lukewarm. There wasn't any real tension passion or otherwise, though the whole thing is basically a sexy scenes. It just felt like drawings, pretty and hot drawings, but just drawings. There wasn't much life to the characters, it had potential to be better.

A very cute story. It's happy and is paced nicely, has nice art and very caring characters.