byeAli23's manga / #age gap(3)

okay so this could’ve been a masterpiece but i guess the author was just as confused as me while writing and reading their own story. The piano part is new and fresh and could’ve been more explored. The same with the abusive dad. We never got to know what exactly he did and why. Same with the main character, I still know nothing about him AND SAME with the son I KNOW NOTHING ABOUT THEM!! :( it could’ve been great but it was extremely bad executed. the artstyle is really pretty but it bothered me sometimes when everything was white like tf.

i mean it’s really weird and melodramatic but i like it i guess they’re cute and i’m on chapter 34 now. i can’t understand how 75 chapters exist cause for me the story could end in the next 5 chapters but uhm oh well, i did say melodramatic hahaha. okie i’m one chapter 63.. and i mean idk it’s okay i guess. i’m on chapter 73 and it like i still think the story could’ve ended long ago but meh it’s meh i guess now kinda boring

the story is not very well written and it’s kinda boring sometimes and a bit confusing but it’s still cute i guess