byeAli23's manga / #Smut(32)

okay so this could’ve been a masterpiece but i guess the author was just as confused as me while writing and reading their own story. The piano part is new and fresh and could’ve been more explored. The same with the abusive dad. We never got to know what exactly he did and why. Same with the main character, I still know nothing about him AND SAME with the son I KNOW NOTHING ABOUT THEM!! :( it could’ve been great but it was extremely bad executed. the artstyle is really pretty but it bothered me sometimes when everything was white like tf.

it’s really hot and that’s all i can say LOL

it was the first one i read and it’s amazing

kuruko is my baby

hot kuruko hot kagami

i really like the development of their love story it was well written... about the other couple they made me so uncomfortable but uhm oh well and the brothers watching themselves have sex is borderline extremely incest like and creppy but the main love story i really did love

cute and hot. perfect. all free characters are so cuuuute

it was cool but like wtf happened to the latest chapters like really WHAT IN THE FUCKKKKKKK quite literally. the confusion gets worse with every new chapter like what in the fuck happened to this shit.. this is so ridiculous i read it again just to make sure my head was doing ok. it’s so fucking ridiculous that u can’t stop reading it like what the fuck i hate this but...

I like it, i think it’s a really cool and chill story even though the main character kind of irritates me a bit. hahaha. i changed my mind it’s kind of badly written because it gets very confusing and i feel really lost like out of nowhere they’re now doing a reality show... uhm yeah sure. i just read chapter 16 and u decided i fucking hate the MC! That bitch is so unfair and seong-sumthing deserves better it feels like this story doesn’t have a purpose, the uke just fantasizes the seme. There’s no chemistry between them and also no love. The MC is so ducking toxic, it pisses me off.