Nancy's manga / #Smut(127)

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[DNF at chapter 31] I liked it because it was cute and with a pretty art style but... after some time it just turned into a big nonsensical mess. Someone commented "I honestly don’t think it was even necessary to take it to that extent [...], seems like it was done mostly for shock factor" and I (and from what I can see many others) agree. (very general spoilers) Also, I'd really like to read about Pilwon and Juha's past more - I feel like it would make a more interesting story and much more sense because the current events are just... too much lol (and Doosik suddenly being shounen manga protagonist lvl powerful is ridiculous). I liked when the story was about Juha and Doosik's personal problems and relationship not this plot from a shitty action and drama movie mixed with a fairytale. And I really hate what the author did with Pilwon - he's so cartoonish rn, he had a lot more potential than being reduced to a nonsensical all-powerful antagonist. Especially since we didn't really have time to explore his character before - I'm pretty sure it would be more shocking and hurtful to experience his character the way Juha did - from the beginning of their story. He's just so flat... Actually, all of their characters are nearly nonexistent - the only traits they have are those needed to drive the story forward. Juha is hurt, Doosik is warm and caring and Pilwon is bad TM.