I had hopes for the story to get better the first 19 chapters in but I found myself skipping chapters to see if o missed anything at all with the pace it was moving and then I found myself feeling like I’m reading a inexperienced shounen ai Novel and then I started dreading opening up this webpage because I just couldn’t find something o enjoyed about the story other than the setting being in a modern world. Like other readers have mentioned the characters lacked charisma and personality and it felt like there wasn’t a reason to root for their relationship. The concept is a good one but not enough to support the whole comic. The last chapters really reminded me of my 9th grade writing assignment.. I hope the author can come back with a team that will help them improve and gain a good following.
The Heart of Red Cloak