Yintan's manga / #School life(5)

There was so much potential with this plot! We could have seen them graduate, get jobs, finally get pregnant, meet the cute baby and grow to love him/her especially since there’s stories out there with the same plot line but not all are about impregnated men so there could have been good plot twists in the story. The MC had good character development but his partner.. pretty one note type of guy, other than a weird mix of characters popping up like the fiancé i felt there was so much more that could have been added. The art is simpler,easy to look at but with a story and setting lacking sometimes it gets a little boring to read. The art cover is what made me come back because it actually had that spark and potential that Im talking about! If you have the patience read it all but your not missing out much when you get halfway.

Idk I wasn’t a fan of the 20+ chapter flashback before anything happened in the story. If it was more memorable or had a deeper Plot than MC loving but acting like he hates ML. I couldn’t relate or find a spark of interest in the characters but the sex scenes we’re pretty great!

It was a slow burn for me to enjoy this story. But it got pretty cute in the end because it didn’t abruptly end when they got together. We got to see some healthy jealousy, healthy boundaries and it just feels this mangaka knows what’s it’s like to have a healthy partnership. I wish it had more depth like we could watch them grow old and one does early or they die together idk hahah

Hmm this felt like 2012 not 2018 BL.. the art is alright and the story telling is a bit one noted. Overall pairs all the boys exactly how you expect. It’s a sequel so I saw it coming but yeah pretty predictable.

Knew I wasn’t crazy after reading the comments.. the first couple is really not that likeable but honestly a good story has the characters even the minor characters set the tone for the environment and plot even if it’s just a school life. The art didn’t really capture any emotions or chemistry.. I couldn’t grasp well what the story was even about. Overall pretty mid.