I really don't like the way the author made Jamil fade into the background, as a polygamist myself, I think this is a very monogamous vision of a +2 relationship. Jamil deserved better. I loved the development of Prey and everything, but bruh when we love more than one person, it doesn't mean that we love them equally/the same way, but we do considerate both of them important if DATING WTF. Jan said he loved Jamil, and even though he loves Prey too and it's ok to feel love in different ways about each person, this just looks like Jamil was a support character/third wheel and not in fact someone who was part of that relationship. I liked it all so much, but this - making Jamil not as important- really turned me off. 3 out of 5.
Hugo