Sadistic-Senpai-Loves-2-Offend's manga / #Shounen Ai(10)

Boring. Comic felt like fragmented rushed plot with stupid, illogical plot elements. And ending was stupid too: Emperor head is only filled with love n love that it makes him stupid, making him take rash, immature decision rather than behaving like a wise responsible adult n monarch. Don’t know what mc did so special that it made ml head over heels over him. I was unable to connect with the characters or story throughout. I just wanted it to end already. Don’t know if novel is also that bad?

This started out good. But somewhere along the middle it seemed author didn’t know how to go about plot and characters, like their heart wasn’t into it, couldn’t generate ideas, and just wanted to end the story and get rid of it turning it into a messed up plot. AT FIRST MC APPROACHED JINYU BECAUSE OF SUNGWO THEN WHEN HE FINALLY FELL FOR JINYU HIMSELF AND REALIZED HE IS DIFFERENT, REAL PERSON, HE WAS FORCED BACK TO RW AND TAKE MODERN-SUNGWO(past crush) AS BOOK-JINYU’s REPLACEMENT. MC emphasized many times in book the both Sungwos were really different from each other.) ASIDE FROM SHARING NAME AND FACE, THE TWO MLs WERE SHOWN TO HAVE DIFFERENT PERSONALITIES AND CHARACTERS, MAKING THEM ESSENTIALLY TWO DIFFERENT INDIVIDUALS. And uke’s true love became Jinyu from the book.

If the plot had developed and given time for readers to connect, it’d have much more heartbreaking impact. HERE’S A RECOMMENDATION OF KINDA SIMILAR STORY: https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/love_me_eat_me/

Ah it’s shounen ai, not yaoi. My long awaited smut wasn’t there. Big, tall, strong, calm archer, senpai seme x cute, smoll, lively, twinky, actor, kohai uke. Lovely. Delicious size difference. Wanted to see seme gobble up this smoll marshmallow. *cough*