The beginning after the end
Amazing world building with great pacing. Tons of character development and masterful use of time skips in all the right places. Update: god this started so promising but each update just makes me so angry and there’s just way too many loose plot points to feel good about reading this. The weekly format really doesn’t work for this and I can already tell the author bit off more than they can chew. I truly foresee an absolute train wreck of a climax and conclusion for the plot. It just feels like instead of wrapping up any outstanding plots they just throw more random shit in cause they can’t think of how to wrap things up. At this point I’m only reading cause I’ve sunk too much time into it. If you want to read a trainwreck like this just go read solo leveling, it’s finished so you won’t have to watch the wreckage in slow motion like with this. Also there are so many complaints about the romance plot line when that has to be the least horrible of all the subplots… like dude this story is a mess for many reasons but having a dominant FL who is given all the same chances to fuck up and grow that the ML was given is not one of the mess ups. update 2: For every new chapter this story gets I will be removing a star. I’m just tired at this point. Let the characters and once good plot Rest In Peace. Having to wait a week for 3 important lines of dialogue and characters moving a grand total of 3 steps is torture. Pls stop
Guang Xiang