For 8chp this is actually quite well done! for one, the art deserves a special mention. The details are beautiful and charac design for the seme is esp hot and for the uke is very pretty/erotic too! Secondly, the plot is actually pretty wholesome. I like the notion of fated pair but this one defs challenged that notion. It's beautiful to think that the bond u build is more important than destiny stuff <3
Hanagara Tsumi