You’re My Favorite Toy
this was pretty cute ngl just a bit confusing at first. #519
viewfinder (Ez)
ok i loved the story overall but there are some little holes? for example the guy that the blond bottom had sex with… i thought he was going to be a love rival or at least come back to cause a scene? idk he just disappeared. also the best girl friend from childhood?? did she disappear as well i liked her a lot!! and the implied second couple from college?? i didn’t rlly like how that as soon as the first couple got together, the focus shifted completely to the second couple,, we didn’t even get to see them go on holidays and the story didn’t even end with them… i obv love the second couple but it feels like they forgot about the main couple. also wasn’t dongha supposed to tell his story? as in his family (mother and little sister)?? what happened to that or did i miss a part? But, overall i loved :) #475
Here U Are