mangasaeki's manga / #poorly written(1)

Ore no Kanbotsu Chikubi ga Senpai no Shitapi de Tachimashita

Complete | Taro Torimaru | 2019 released

Honestly, the story was shit. There really wasn't much 'story' to begin with, actually. Not that yaoi is really meant to have a story based on definition alone but wow... I mean, this was clearly meant to be a story and well, it was just shit. The character's weren't deep. Most of the time they sucked, especially Ono and Yuta. Like, even though it's coherent enough that it's tolerable, the climaxes or rather, the events that the characters are supposed to deal with are poorly written and sloppily dealt with. Kazuma is sexually assaulted many times, but because old yaoi troupes die hard, he doesn't see an issue with that. In fact, he has literally no back bone at all. Idk man, if you're looking for JUST smut, this is the manga for you, otherwise, don't waste your time. :/ This really disappointed me as I was hoping for a well developed and thoroughly fleshed out story given the amount of chapters it has but nope.. Better luck next time, I guess.