mangasaeki's manga / #fantasy(46)

While the art is beyond beautiful, the writing is atrocious. No flow, no sense, no rhyme or reason to it. This manhwa is a good example of when an artist should've worked with an editor or an author. The plot had so much potential but there was just nothing but rush and fluff for any of it to make coherent sense. It tried too hard to be emotional at all times, which is very overwhelming and hard to follow, making as uncomfortable as possible. I really couldn't help but cringe each chapter. I couldn't actually finish it because it was so poorly written. I'm sorry, but it's the truth. If you can handle a plot that's extremely messy, with characters that don't have solidity to them, and is plainly not executed well, then by all means, go ahead. However, for me, my expectations were hung out to dry and I found myself very disappointed in this manhwa. :(

This is so wonderfully written! I really wish there was more to the story! ;-; Keita is the cutest, kindest and sweetest human being!