I liked the story quite a lot, the only issue I have with it is that I feel like they were lacking a real connection. Seme was very standoffish the whole time and it just came across to me that his feelings weren't as genuine. Uke's erratic behaviour was concerning as well, almost too young and unpredictable, so it didn't balance too well between them for me. Nonetheless, still cute and rather sweet to the end.
Koi Kirari, Kage Sururi