Oribu's manga / #Supernatural(90)

Oh I love them so much This is so well written I almost cried I love how the author portrays love and intimacy between them, makes me all fuzzy inside ^^ Also bruh i can’t belive 70% Of this authors work is levi x erwin fanfics

Title story best, 1,2,5.5 Dude what is up with that second volume sheesh

As much as I enjoy this authors works most of them do a pretty bad job at building and resolving tension and have some weird time skips in them and it’s most apparent in this story, love the concept and the characters are cute but it’s not living up to its potential in the slightest even compared to some of their other works

Well…shit’s weird, but that’s to be expected from this author orz And once again there’s plot but also some serious fetishy stuff also mpreg? But like he’s a fish…. I don’t know man

The yaoi proportions are killing me But it’s fine they’re not that’s bad and the style is so pretty They’re very cute and it’s a nice short story! If not for the extra they would be so pure T T

Does nobody on this site have any critical thinking skills, this story is so all over the place it can’t decide if it’s just porn or just plot it jumps between the two so jarringly and their relationship is so toxic wthhh and they try to make it fluff all of a sudden halfway through, revealing an apparently heartwarming backstory, girl whatever, he literally abuses him sexually from the start including straight up rape, whatever, the artstyle is beautiful but the paneling in relation to storytelling is sloppy as hell and the story itself is honestly so uninteresting and unoriginal, don’t even get me started on the zoofilia cause damn it was not subtle at all huh, like for comparison in “Ookami he no Yomeiri” (which I’m quite fond of) the guy does turn to some animal form as well but it did not feel this fetishistic and zoofilic, what is this manga and why does everyone sing its praises, omitting all the issues I mentioned it’s still sloppy and incredibly rushed 1*