Oribu's manga / #Slice Of Life(286)

This is so weird It’s like bad…but has a good plot.. but has a badly written plot at the same time… and the dialogue, flow, pace sucks ass I just kinda didn’t enjoy any of it in the end even though it could’ve been really good…. Idk def not a reread unless there is some retranslation or something Tbh I was rushing through all chapters, I just kinda wanted it to end?… and there were so many plot points I kinda want this to be a full on show and this feels like a rough draft.. yea maybe

Hm

If not for the egregious redraws, this is a really interesting story and I love the charas! Still not finished though