Anal_Frog's manga / #Josei(8)

7.8-8.8/10 This was good But dissatisfying... The premise was interesting but execution not so Some parts of the story did not get nearly enough screen time, while others get needlessly reiterated like the WHOLE story of the first maidens love Like yes 3 of the 5 times gave some new info BUT 4 and 5 were the same only the 4 was way to fucking long like a whole chapter if not a couple. It was WAY too long for just an info dump but also it crammed WAY too much into itself like that should be like 10-20 chapters stand alone. The 5 time it was told was flawless and done so in mearly a couple of PANELS idk why we wasted our fucking time on the 4 Some things were extremely rushed and underdeveloped Like mc, we see her thoughts but sometimes she does and acts in ways so random that idk why we even get her thoughts AT ALL because I don't fucking understand her some times -_- Also some things just...happen? And for what? "I already know you planned to kill me and are pregnant with my kid!" Ok why not show that TO THE FUCKING AUDIENCE THEN?!? "I am barren and also A YUL, buhu" A FUCKING YUL?!?!? DON'T YOU THINK THAT IS IMPORTANT??? OLWHY SAY THAT IN THE LAST FUCKING PANNEL LIKE THIS WASN'T EVEN RELEVANT TO HER STORY WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK WHY DID YOU MAKE HER A FUCKING YUL>=[[ ALSO THE FACT THAT ML COMMITTED A FUCKING GENOCIDE, YES A GENOCIDE JUST COMPLETELY FORGIVEN AND FORGOTTEN And mc this BITCH learns this and says rightfully so for him to eternally fuck off and the next time they see each other he randomly barges on her bathing, starts groping her, and she just says quoting JD "all in forgiven baby=D" Like be so FUCKING for real Also every single disability in this was cured, even when it made no sense for it do happen I don't know why authors hate disabled ppl When I think about it the ml has been a source of MC's suffering In her every single timeline and the fact that the author doesn't realize that IS what they wrote is actually disturbing He NEVER actually cares about anything she has to say in any life time, every time she is ignored: She wants to be left alone, he forces her to mutelate herself She wants to die and return to heaven, he bind her soul FOREVER to earth He TELLS mc mother to mutelate her and kill everyone she knows and loves and just leave her at the hands of a know rapist and abuser He commits a genocide to and all MC's ppl The ONLY reason she fell for him is because he "eased the pain of her life" but he caused all of her life to be the way it is She had to burn half her face of every month FOR years because of him, and he knows it and he wasn't nearly sad enough abouth that it was just like "you hurt yourself??:0 that's bad! (⁠╯⁠︵⁠╰⁠,⁠) I'm sad (⁠っ⁠˘̩⁠╭⁠╮⁠˘̩⁠)⁠っ" And NOT "OMFG I caused all of this?!?!! I'm such a monter!!!" She wanted to live in a convent He banged her so she couldn't She didn't want kids, he knocked her up She wanted to run away WITH HIM, he said no She wanted a quiet life and NOT to be empress, he made her one And at each turn the author wrote it like she wanted it even though she fist verbally state she didn't want any of that, but then without ANY explantation when those things happen either they write it like her reasoning has always been different or that she is just happy with this=D Such bullshit for real I'm soooo pissed after reading this... MAYBE the potential was just 8/10 and the actual story was just a 3-4/10 ... Yeah I honestly think that is that ರ⁠_⁠ರ

25/10

12/10 This is seriously the best straight romance comic I have *EVER* read ಠಿ⁠_⁠ಠಿ