Anal_Frog's manga / #Dragon(3)

This was fecking weirdddΣ(ಠ_ಠ) I-i just can't Idk there are some cute scenes in there mainly in the start but it is just soo shallow, the dialogue is clanky as fuck, things keep getting repeated, and just redconing each other? Like thered be a scene where one thing happen then the story goes somewheres else comes back and completely rewrites the scene? Like that usually happens at least once in a story but here it happened like 10-15 times like what the hell? I stopped getting invested and believing anything that happened.... Also for some reasons the creators of this tried to make it's pacing terrible?? Like if the scenes were rearranged everything would be a ok, BUT they are all over the place and it would be in the middle of something important just to jump for like half a chapter with exposition also there is no set up for anything and stuff just comes out of nowhere Wasted time honestly //////////////////////////////////// If you ever re-read this only do so up to them doing the hockey pockey in the library or even earlier (༎ຶ‿༎ຶ ) Peace out Byeeee

Last chapter was a bit of a wtf but otherwise a splendid story 8.9/10 for the story and 9.9/10 for the characters personality, legit loved those feckers x,D