ALisAnimeLover's manga / #novelist(4)

Ch 1-3 is meh. Tbh I don't feel the love from the author's side, only veeeery mildly. And the editor's issue wasn't explained or what, it just mentioned that he has trauma, you don't really see well if it's his sister, mother, lover who caught him fapping. It's also a minor unrelated issue?????????? Not even unrelated, more like contradictory???? 3/10 Ch 4 is pedophilia. Tho they ended up together when they grew up, but the way I see it, the older dude is disappointed the shota grew up. 0/10 (or -10 tbh) Ch 5 is twisted story about a master tied to the bed, no explanation why, and the butler, very cliche, being an all-around expert on money, buying back the owner's (or his family's) house and company etc. 2/10 Ch 6 is meh. Sensei is a replacement for the previous sensei, both in school and for the seme who's a student. Previous sensei is probs a pedo, new sensei is a lot younger and a doormat. 0/10 (at least not negative) 1.25/10. Yeet. Ew. Why'd I read this

(Spoilers, mild rant/questions) For vol 1, Ranji was surprised with Ibuki's reveal that he had been investigated. But he was most surprised when his family was mentioned - Arthur. Is he afraid of Arthur/his family? Why was he so brave to hurt Arthur's hosts then? And why didn't Arthur approach him earlier about it? *shrugs* === It isn't vol 3 ch 3 just ch 3 i feel scammed Smh stop reuploading vol 1 chapters

Now I want gramps' story Ch 1-5 + 6.5 is the main story, ch 6 is an unrelated one shot. The main story is... fine? Romantic development is kinda inexistent although I did like how the plot progressed chapter by chapter (especially with how this story isn't really meant to be a series). Tbh, I think ch 6 has its lore better developed (about hunters, beasts and monsters, etc) compared to the main story... although it has that disease called "one shot syndrome" where the story has barely any development. The confession for ch 6 just used aphrodisiac as a plot device to happen, otherwise you don't really feel anything from the uke. He just feels like an NPC object of desire by the MC. And the brother came out of nowhere, lol, he added nothing to the story. Is this an extra story of another manga?

The first story really makes you beg for more, but at the same time, it ended at the perfect moment. Second story is meh; cliche and just... that. Third story is painful, 2 parallel unrequited loves; again, like the first story, makes you beg for more, but ended at the perfect moment. Last story is the best in terms of length though; unlike 1 and 3, it has an actual conclusion.