The story is a bit predictable and cliche, but I like the characters. I love how the seme took actions to stop himself knowing that he has no self-control (also with the help of his big bro). And I love the moment the uke fell in love with the seme - the seme's words were very considerate saying "It's okay to be down." and such. Like damn. That's an important pov that most people forget. 7
The extra story was... too fast. Well, it's a one-shot. 4
Toki no Maigo o Sagashite!