Memento Scarlet
The enemy kinda gave the feeling that it should've been a plottwist but the character wasn't built enough, so it didn't feel that way. The romance also felt abrupt and not fully developed. Would be better to have more chapters (which unfortunately is impossible).
I'm Yours, Blood and Soul
Honestly, I like how they're no longer tied through a contract because now they'd have the choice to leave or to stay. And obviously they'd stay =u= I want an extra just for closure that they'll stay together, and not that scene where the devil took the vampire's soul. This feels a bit short, but it's the good thing about it. It wrapped up nice (except the extra about the devil taking out the soul, but yeah...) I also loved the extra about the VP and the serial killer.
As You Wish (Seoho)