ALisAnimeLover's manga / #Messy pacing(15)

Sora!!!

Pacing's off. I dislike the seme. Such a jerk.

Baka malimutan ko first comments ko eh. Shit art. Shit lips and eyes. Too much narration, i guess. Or pangit script. Or mabilis. Or all of the above. Dropped cuz magulo mf. And while maganda so far plot, execution sux. Dropped at chapter 1, sorry.

Can you believe I dropped this only after chapter 3

My heart was so broken when the uke just wanted to confirm if the seme loves him and that it's not just lust that keeps them together. Then the seme couldn't answer the uke. Turns out the seme just cannot imagine that gay love is counted as love. What an idiot. Although I do like how the seme straight up rejected his ex because he preferred the uke though - even though he didn't know what he felt for the uke.

I like how the seme sincerely apologized for raping the uke - even though the uke does not regard it as rape -- mangakas take note! apologize nevertheless! I hate the shitfuck manager for posting sex photos when the uke broke up with his fwb relationship with him though. Fuck. The story's pacing is off. First chapter is okay... the next three are fine... then poof, ending.

I'd rate it higher if it didn't suddenly end. Love the doting uncle tho~ #lifegoals

I don't know if it's because I've read Hana to Junketsu first (similar story, but different story altogether) but I didn't like the pacing of this one tied with unnecessary drama and poor execution. I like the second story though. Short drama in between but that got resolved fast when they talked it out. Seme: I may have overtrained him. Friend: More like you overdid him!

Everything is painful but anticlimactic. It focuses too much on the pain, not the story.