ALisAnimeLover's manga / #Cliffhanger(4)

Not really surprised tho. Just cockblocked by the cliffhanger

The story has a lot of... not really plot holes but simply weak points. 1) Okay, so Haruto learns that Ren is having sex with some old dude. He is not entirely sure if this is consensual or not, but he has a huge hunch it isn't given Ren's situation. But instead of thinking whether or not to report this to the police or doing anything concrete, he merely contemplates about how he feels about Ren. Uh-huh. 2) So apparently, the rapist dude is not Daddy Long Legs (what a plot twist!), but rather his secretary who he trusted to give money to Ren and report to him about Ren's situation. Being Daddy Long Legs, why couldn't he simply give Ren a credit/debit card and contact him regularly? And just let the secretary/care taker report once in a while, but maintaining contact with Ren. This way, Ren could have reported to him about the situation. 3) The whole plot twist that it was just the secretary and not Daddy Long Legs - that DLL is actually kind, is most probably because the author wanted the manga's ending to be how it did (long separation until they meet again) . 4) Again, in the ending, DLL took Ren abroad with no problems. So why didn't he do that a long time ago? For the drama. The whole story just wanted to revolve around a "realistic world" where one of the characters has a very "out-of-this-world" background story. And it's not executed well.

This had so much potential and...??? Wth is that cliffhanger ending. Rapey tag cuz it's essentially the thief threatening/raping the cop. Although in some scenes, the cop initiated it so it's not really rape? I guess???

As you progress through the stories, the cliffhanger becomes more intense Ch 1-3: Main story. Simple and cliche, it isn't bad but isn't great either. 6/10 Ch 4: It's mostly left up to interpretation, but it heavily implies that the student is a heavy sleeper (who for some reason takes a nap and wakes up perfectly on time during break time), and the tutor is doing something during that time. 3/10 Ch 5: the controversial story in the comments. I'm not going to spoil since it's a good one, but just be prepared for an extreme cliffhanger. 6/10 Ch 6: Simple and cliche. A requited unrequited love. Compared to ch 5, this feels less of a cliffhanger, but at the same time ch 5 can be a simple open-ended story, this one is purely like an intro to another story. 4/10