Frosche79's manga / #Shoujo(238)

I really liked the story and the art. It's just that I skipped to the latest chapters so that I could see if the story is almost complete but unfortunately, for it to have over 90 chapters but far from over, discouraged me from reading further. I'm going to wait until this story is finished so that I won't encounter any cliffhangers.

To be honest, it's a good read. The art is excellent and the characters are adorable. The only thing I dislike is that there are a lot of confusing things as the story progressed. Like, did the author forget or something? Like, it was mentioned that the MC was 5 years old when her uncle picked her up, but 5 years later she just turned 8 years old. I mean, what???? Did the author forget to count or something? 5+5 equals 10, genius. Also, I thought the MC's mother, former empress, supposedly died BEFORE her father, the former emperor, died. But they mentioned that the one who forced her mother to fight in the war, causing her death, was the emperor (the current emperor)----so that means her father died first??? Before her mom???? Like, huh????? Otherwise, her father, which was the emperor at that time, was the one who sent his wife to die. It's confusing, REALLY! In addition to that, I thought the Prophet and her Knight were known to be a pair, not a trio. The head mage was also included?! Like what???? I'm also curious, how come in her past life and this life, she never mentioned she had a cousin from her evil uncle emperor? So the uncle did have a child, how come the MC got the throne then?? Huh????? I'm completely lost now. If there's anything worse than a bad art and poorly made characters, it's the confusing storyline. Now that I think about it, this doesn't deserve 5 stars for me. They just had to be wrong with the important details and hurt my head.

I genuinely didn't like the story. The only thing I I think is okay here is the art. Especially with the characters. I personally love the other guy, the second male lead here, with the art and character and all. The storyline is bad, the pacing itself is okay, but the main characters I personally don't like. Like, what the hell are they doing sleeping together when they should be focused more on running away and surviving. Also, what is up with the FL? Why does she not wear any bra. That's the most concerning part for me. I get that it's josei but, come on. You made it more in line with drama, at least make the character more comfortable in a way that reality is not that far off. I can't imagine wearing nothing on top and having these tribemen ogling me and then jumping from tree to tree with my boobs just swinging around. Also, the reason why I lasted so long reading into the story is because I was curious about the thing they called their god here. And the more I read, the less I understand. The entity's not a god, it's easier to say that it's a demon instead. And I didn't like that the story reached over 90 chapters with more and more problems, come with less and less solutions. Hated that. So I'm gonna go. I'll probably look back on this but won't finish it because of this feedback coz honestly, I tried. I really tried and it didn't work out for me.