Public Sex
Okay..... I came here from a KrisPNatz video and I am mind BLOWN!! Last few chapters caught me off guard. I was absolutely blind-sided by the fact that the guy who seemed like he was absout to be most manipulative, turned out to be the lEAST MANIPULATIVE OF THEM ALL AAAAHHHH,!! Now to the important. The incest was fucked up (no explanation necessary) but it worked so well and made total sense for the big bro. I was super happy that I didn't see anything coming. I liked the way the Uke was actually secretly in control the whole time, but that it never felt like the Seme was completely out of his depth. I liked how the Seme began to rival Uke's messed up nature. I liked how everyone in the end felt completely equal. I like Kaoru (the bro) as an addition, it felt like it tied things up, and I liked how everyone basically had their own version of a happy ending. It tied it up like a bow.
Wasps and Butterflies