satorxu's manga / #Unrequited love(10)

confusing ass storyline. like it was slightly good at first, it was wierd that he the seme asked him to film porn for him? but there was still the seggs and the falling for each other, but near the end when the uke found out the seme was manipulating him in falling for him it was so wierd. first i was mad he forgave him so easily then i was madder when i rea;ized he was getting revenge"??? like he apoligized and he obviously changed idk why the uke still decided it was a great idea to hurt him. and the "revenge" he took made no sense... he broke all his electronics or sum??? and the convo they had when they broke up i was like huh?? then they ended up together which i guess was alright and ill give this a 2 because art was good but i hate the way the "character development" was portrayed through story. and the love triangle was so dumb i didnt like that other guy he was just confusing and wierd. i didnt even stick around for his side story but maybe i shouldve because it probalby wouldve been a better love story than the main one

what. the. fuck. i.... i don't know what to say about this story. this is completly disappointing honestly. the pages seemed to be out of order for most of the time so i didn't understand anything. I don't know if it would be better if i read it on taptoon but i think i got the main idea of the story and i basically hate it. i wouldve given this a 3 stars because of the art and because the story was kinda good. But the ending was a so half-assed ong. im not even sure who he ended up with- worst of it all, everything was too rushed. definetly not one of the good ones smh :/ and sex scenes weren't as detailed and thagt disappointed me considering that's one of my favorite things in yaoi :/

THE ENDING MADE ME FEEL SO EMPTY UGHH