kokothefujo's manga / #unrequited love(89)

There was something missing but I can't put my finger on it. I felt that the story should have been more developed. I loved the seme and how he really cared for the uke but, I felt they pushed the death aside pretty quickly. I thought I would cry but I didn't and that confused me. The brother was a good friend and sibling and yet I didn't feel anything for him. It was a good story over all but something more was needed to make a great story.

The second story wasn't to my liking. I didn't like the cousin and I thought the new seme deserved to have his own story where he found love

Initially I really hated the written but by the end I grew to like him. Also the story line was a bit wierd and fucked up but over all I liked it

This would have been such a hot story if the first use wasn’t literal shit. He’s the adult and yet he goes and cheats on his partner several times, to make matters worse the partner Is fine with it?!?!?! I was so mad and hopeed the uke would get his just desserts but he never did. The cop with the soon to be cop was a cute story and the art is pretty. I just can’t get over the shitty uke

The stalker really threw me through a loop but everything else was so fluffy. Still wish I got more on the side stories