kokothefujo's manga / #Interesting(137)

There was something missing but I can't put my finger on it. I felt that the story should have been more developed. I loved the seme and how he really cared for the uke but, I felt they pushed the death aside pretty quickly. I thought I would cry but I didn't and that confused me. The brother was a good friend and sibling and yet I didn't feel anything for him. It was a good story over all but something more was needed to make a great story.