Midnight Sparkling
I liked the story but the redraws weren't very good and it took away from the story in my experience
Tenchou, Koi Desu.
The first story was good but I felt that the second was a little lacking. I, personally, would have preferred if there was more pining and angst. I felt the situation was set up to be big and dramatic, but the delivery was kinda boring for me.
Karini mo Renai
All of the stories were pretty well thought out and left you feeling refreshed. The only thing that bothered me was the art, it felt very simplistic and almost looked more like a sketch to me( it could just be the style but I didn't really like it).
Kingyo no Koi
The seme is so cute in that he only ever gets emotional about the uke. And the uke is so precious when he tries to make everyone happy.
Ore no Kirai na Tsugaisama