Kill the Villainess
17. So what is the point of this story? Everyone liking her more than Helena?
I Will Change The Genre
25....ah I love this! All of the characters are interesting and you are able to fall in love with them! Not to mention the story is unique
The Villain Discovered My Identity
44....I’m kinda sad the villain isn’t actually a “villain.” But this is a good story nevertheless! Although, sad there isn’t any “drama.”
The Lady I Served Became a Young Master
30...cute. Main lead girl doesn’t feel like a person to me though. Like she has no goals ambitions for herself? Like truly what 21st century American girl would accept being a MAID let along being a maid for the rest of her life??
I Became the Ugly Lady
33...eh main lead girl doesn’t really seem relatable she seems very Mary Sue. I feel like Crown Prince should’ve never gotten involved with her. And it is so disrespectful both to the readers and to the old girls whose body it is that the girl’s fat all melted away in a bathtub. Not to mention the only reason the girl was considered “ugly” in the first place was that she was fat. What about your readers who are fat? Instead this story should’ve been about the original girl having a do over and self-improving. Not some Mary Sue waltzing in and getting everyone to like her.
I Became the Hero's Mom
11... all the characters are well done! The main lead girl feels like a real person, the ml guy is adorable (I’m glad he didn’t follow the cold guy trope nor the weaker then women/simp trope...like he’s a mix of both in a good way), & the little kid is adorable! I’m excited to see where this story goes. The only problem is if guy shows interest so quickly I don’t care to finish. Like girl is already marry him, the guy is questioning when he fell for her, & kid likes the girl....so what’s the plot of the story?
Happy Ending for the Time-Limited Villainess
17...how the fuck is the girl gonna give away all of her family’s fortune when her brother is still alive? Also, please I beg STOP calling the silver haired red eyed guy good and noble! If he was truly “noble” he would’ve NEVER agreed to a six month marriage that will live you poor and w/o anything at the end of it! Regardless of whether or not you “begged for it.” Taking everything away from a girl who is ill and whose adult family members are all dead? Whenever the ml girl calls him noble or any other variation of that term it makes me so sick to my stomach!
I Became the Tyrant's Secretary
21....ml guy is really cute! I’m glad to get a break from all the silver hair/black hair ml guy characters that have been popular lately. Story wise it puts a unique spin on a lot of elements we have seen before. I especially like that the ml girl became a secretary as a girl instead of pretending to be a guy to do so. The fact that both ml girl and guy don’t realize that they have feelings for each other is really cute too...although, ml girl iskeid there from the 21st century. She should know the signs that indicate loving someone. Also, the original ml girl protagonist...why was she able to get iskeid into that world and then she got a do over after failing? That is unfair.
The Goal is to Become a Gold Spoon so I need to be Completely Invulnerable
19...while the story has all of the characteristics of an interesting story I feel some sort of disconnect from the story? I think because there is so many time jumps that it feels like I’m not living through the story with the girl but watching it at 2x speed? S/n it also bothers me a lot that the girl is drawn like a child and acts like a child too. Granted I guess 15 year olds are children....but then why do the main leads feel so much older than her?
The Viridescent Crown