nobile's manga / #too short(360)

I would've loved to see them 2 or 3 years later, once Hal is taller than her... ;D

It had potential to be more than just a oneshot, but I guess it's still fine as it is.

I feel like it would have been better if it was a bit longer...

That was really adorable.

Sooooo cuuuteee! Can't wait to read the continuation :)

Gaaah I wish they had made it longer, at least to the moment that his dad meets her... or y'know when they marry or have the next generation yakuza bosses... a girl can wish xD

I wish they had shown that underclassman being all happy and lovey-dovey... He was so nice and patient...

The art was breathtakingly beautiful, I've always been a fan of that watercolour-style, everything about it was just beautiful. Story-wise... I have no idea what the author wanted to convey... First they're excited because the guy's manga got published, then the girl reminisces on the unexpected hard work she was forced to put in to help him, then when she realises he didn't get much money from that reality kicks in and she's stunned that it's hard to make a living. After that, he says he got a ticket to go watch her play (they said park, but then it was mentioned she was an actress so I'm guessing typo), after that interaction he appears to be laying on his couch alone on the verge of panicking because he doesn't know what he'll do in the future. And that's it, that's the whole story... the author was trying to make the readers understand that even with hard work, you can still have a tough life because you don't get paid enough, so you might have to reconsider your career choices? I dunno... it got 2 stars because the art was so nice, but otherwise it would've gotten less than one, if possible.

All the stories were sweet or funny or a combination of both, but the last short one was my favourite