nobile's manga / #meh(101)

Art aside, I had grown to like the story, until the last chapter. It's like they attempted to wrap up everything in less than 25 pages and it was just a completely disjointed mess, seriously that chapter was utter crap. I'm not upset about the final outcome, but just how they got to that point, it's just really poor writing.

Lazy writing, maybe it's just the author that was terrible or the translation made it worse, but it was so bad I found myself more and more angry with each page I read.

Unlike the mangaka's other stories, this one didn't really seem to get me so interested in the characters, or I couldn't really relate to them or see much depth in them. TIL a new word: "splenetic". xD

Eh, poor character development, it might have started interesting but it went downhill afterwards being all predictable.

Classic story about friendzoned girl liking the guy that likes her friend.

1 Fluffy shoujo version of Kuzu no Honkai? 2 Awkwardly-paced romance, I couldn't really relate to their feelings at all. 3 It was a bit of a sweet story, there were a few questions that I thought should have been addressed, but overall it wasn't bad. 3.5 This one was actually quite refreshing to read, I could understand both their circumstances and, as much as it pains me to admit, I was surprised that both of them actually thought out their positions and made good and rational choices. 4 It was a nice story, but didn't really like the pacing for Sensei changing his mind about her, felt too quick that it became sort of shallow or fake. 5 Just one word: bittersweet. 6 I feel like this could have been the best story of them... but that ending seemed so strange... not in what happened, but more in how it happened and the time things took to happen. It felt REALLY odd, considering they had taken up so much time building things up. Also, what was the deal with glasses girl? was her presence even relevant?

Really bad story...

Clichéd plot with no goal other than attract viewers to their anime (which in turn is only 5 minutes long, each episode!). It had really nice art, both the characters and the food looked great, but that was its sole good point.

I really couldn't stand the first two stories, it was all so full of clichés and far-fetched "plot" points (in quotes, since the stories were so short and chronologically took so little time, there wasn't much story to tell); it was too much of a stretch how shallow their feelings must have been, to have been swayed so "deeply" in a matter of days or less. If you've been avoiding someone for years (because they broke your heart in a humiliating way), it won't take a day for you to truly fall in love with them. The latter stories weren't amazing, but they were slightly cute at the very least. Sequel to the first story: Bokura No Himitsu Wo Kaihou Shiyou Ka

It's strange that the story with the most far fetched premise ended up being the only remotely-believable one. Also, dark hair and mole made it just a bit better :D