nobile's manga / #confusing(45)

I'm fine with bad art if I'm really into the story, and I'm fine with weird stories if the art is nice... the stories might have been a bit interesting, in a very out-of-the-box way, but they were too close to being really weird and/or creepy and the art just didn't suit well with me at all.

Such prettyness all over! My only complaint is that either at least on the first half of the manga or maybe all but by the end I had gotten used to it, the translation was just absolutely terrible; it was really hard to understand the details, everything seemed to be worded really weird. Aside from that, funny story, gorgeous people all over no matter where, it wasn't bad at all :) I like specially how the mangaka puts so much effort in the main characters' hair, I don't know why but I really think their hair looks beautiful.

I'm sad, this had such a great story but then it just had to have a "meh" ending. Not only just "meh" but confusing... if he had been released from that room when he was a stork after getting the box, why would he go back as a child and wait for her to get there once more? Art was beautiful as it always is with this mangaka.

It was a bit confusing at first, but by the end most of my questions were answered... It's a pity that was the end of it though, it was quite the set up for a much longer-running series.

I think the idea behind the story was good, but the pacing and the way the story progressed seemed all very off, made me dislike reading it :/

I'm not very sure what their relationship ended up as, I understood the "the screw fell off completely" line to mean that she no longer was a doll and that she would be able to express her emotions better, but I don't understand how that is affected by her relationship with him.

Interesting set of fairytale-like stories, it doesn't really feel like any of them truly had a happy ending, "somber" might be a better word to describe them.

Story about birds and relationships. I think that writing even one more chapter would've been enough to make this a really great story; heck even just extending the oneshot to be longer would've helped. As it is, it just started paving the way to a very interesting story, but never really made it there.