Maybeblue's manga / #smut(155)

One night Akira was approached by the 10-years-older Goto who says he wants to "buy him" for the night. Akira takes him up on his offer and soon discovers that despite making such a bold move, the man is a total newbie at relationships. At the hotel Goto reveals that the reason he wanted to have sex with Akira was because he reminded him of his highschoool crush and thought of making Akira act as his stand-in to fulfill his lingering desires

The sex scenes were a bit forced sometimes, they didn't fit the mood at all and came out of nowhere (and the drawing style is pretty exagerated on expressions so the whole thing was even more ridiculous) but I guess a lot readers do enjoy smut so the author probably did what they needed to do. I liked that they addressed the ml's daddy issues but the way they talked that problem out could have had a more serious tone, he sorted out his feelings too quickly and it took like two sentences to convince Seichi that all was good and that it wasn't a problem anymore (also it was confusing the way the topic popped out sometimes as if it never actually got solved). I wish there was a scene where they showed Seichi and Ayato talk their problems out after they argued and Ayato said those terribile things to him, it would have been a really cute moment for them. The pacing was also a bit weird, the relationship progressed really fast at first and then slowed down then again really fast and then slow down and so on...in terms of how they acted it didn't seem like they were giving any thought to what they were doing. It's like they skipped some stepts along the way of their relationship and then came back to them at random times without a logic. Of course these are all things I didn't like about this but it's overall a good story that has it's own identity, with the most unique trait being the teenage son and the ml's explicit daddy issues. It's cute and fun but I probably would have liked it a lot more if any of the sex scenes made sense or just fit the flow of the story a bit. And I really didn't like the way the author draw those faciale expressions while they were doing it I'm sorry :(

Haven't really read it